Not my fave

The narration was great and added a comedic element to the story. The storyline itself was one I did not expect at all and fully intrigued me, especially when the real motivation behind it all came forward. I would normally reference the characters names but that may give something away so I will just go with hero and heroine as they both go by Scarlett.

I really liked the twist and thought it was a great element to the reason behind the heroine's motivations but it wasn't carried out to its full potential. The villain was written with a funny side and it didn't add much to the story, I really just added words to the page with how much he liked to talk. I loved the hero and how he was so out of his element in so many areas but in the bedroom he knew exactly what to do. He was really an unexpected alpha and I thought the heroine would take on more of that role in their relationship. The heroine was super protective of her sister and this was a shining quality that I adored but her sister was her complete opposite and not a character I was drawn to.

Overall, a great story and I enjoyed the unexpectedness of it all.

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