Epic start to a series!

Captivating heroes and villains with proper grab you by the genitals combat. the plague spawn are bloody terrifying. like a zombie version of The Thing. Cant wait to sink my teeth into the next one.

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Not too shabby.

Whilst not deeply thought provoking this is a enjoyable book. The characters are likeable the world is well constructed and the dialogue flows.
I enjoyed the narration

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Couldn't finish - narration was not great

I liked the idea of this book but couldn't get through it because I couldn't get on with the narration. The narrator makes all the characters seem slapstick and they all had weird comedy voices.

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A story that was never allowed to be itself.

Ashes of the sun has a tantalising concept, a pair of siblings split at a young age and molded by vastly different sides of their world.

It's mostly downhill from there, but let me preface this review with some positives. The action is well paced and the work is in general very digestible, rarely did i feel the need to jump back to catch some detail. There is a single strong supporting character (for most of the book anyhow). I personally find the magic system neat, though it's probably not as hard as modern readers prefer and if magic solving a story issue by doing something it's never done before the book is probably not for you.



Now to more negative matters. This book has a lot of fighting, technically well executed fighting to be honest, but with one exception the fights never have any stakes. Who survives and who wins every fight can be discerned easily from the political orientation of the author, and it's not possible to enjoy the book without getting quite familiar with what that orientation is, mostly because it's vapidly scattered across the world and story without much thought. As an example the book always makes sure to slide in some mention of side and background characters sexuality, but because it's done non-organically
It inadvertently paints the entire setting as being mostly populated with homosexual people.

Both protagonists are not immensely compellingly but for different reasons at the very least. The brothers has something he wants done, something he wants to fix, but the story never thinks to show us that it's broken in first place.
The sister feels more rounded and grounded in the actual world building, but because we experience her thought's over the later half of the book because very unlikeable, mostly because she is far from self aware and intensely arrogant, this is compounded by the fact that the book does not really realise how unselfaware she is, nor does she ever really face any consequences for her arrogance.

The books antagonists are mostly dimensional throw aways introduced moments before they are slain, but the that is still a step up from the countless fights against the (admittedly well described and creep) monsters that serve as most of the characters obstacles. The villains who have time to breathe fare better, but are without exception left with disappointing conclusions.


The most painful thing about this book is that i can see a good story in there somewhere, strangled by author's real life worldview and left flat by not allowing actions to have severe consequences in alot of cases.

I'll end this review on a high note, there is a single hard choice made by a character in this book that results in an surprising amount engaging conflict, so i have faith that the author could craft a better story given another chance.
I'll keep an eye out for for that, in the meantime there a much better book to read than this.

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